*Older Lucy
*Older Macy
*Narrators 1, 2, and 3
(N1, N2, N3)
*Lucy, a stepsister
*Cinderella
Max, a mouse
In this retelling of the classic fairy tale, the “wicked” stepsisters tell all
Learning Objective: In this version of Cinderella told from the stepsisters’ perspective, the stepsisters learn an important lesson: to appreciate what makes each person unique.
👑 Prologue 👑
Older Lucy: Oh, hello there!
Older Macy: We’re Cinderella’s stepsisters.
Older Lucy (proudly): Cinderella’s wicked stepsisters.
Older Macy: Lucy!
Older Lucy: Sorry.
Older Macy: We’d like to say that despite what you’ve heard, we weren’t actually wicked.
Older Lucy: Well, we were a little wicked.
Older Macy: But we didn’t realize it. We thought we were helping.
Older Lucy: Remember Cinderella? The girl with the glass slippers?
Older Macy: People said we made her do our chores and kept her from going to the ball.
Older Lucy: But then her Fairy Godmother came to the rescue, made her a new dress—
Older Macy: —and then Cinderella and the Prince fell in love and—
Older Lucy: Blah, blah, blah, snore!
Older Macy: Lucy!
Older Lucy: Sorry.
Older Macy: What my sister is trying to say is . . . that’s not what really happened.
Older Lucy: The real story is much more interesting.
Older Macy: Shall we?
Older Lucy: Let’s!
👑 Scene 1 👑
N1: Macy and Lucy are pruning some bushes in their front yard.
N2: Suddenly, there’s a ruckus.
N3: Cinderella comes flying around the side of the house on . . .
Lucy: OMG. Is that a unicycle?
Cinderella: Macy! Lucy! Check me out!
N1: Her mouse and bird pals sit on her shoulders, holding on for dear life.
Max: Wheeeee!
Sam: I’m gonna be sick!
Macy: Be careful! Watch out for the—
Cinderella: Whoa—WHOA—WHOAAAA!!!
Lucy: —fertilizer.
N2: Cinderella topples off the unicycle onto the pile of stinky dirt.
Cinderella (laughing): That was awesome!
Lucy: Cindy, what are you . . . wearing?
Cinderella: Like it? I made it myself!
N3: She spins around, showing off her bejeweled cape and matching sneakers.
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Macy: Uh, well—
N1: Suddenly, a royal trumpet sounds.
George: Hear ye, hear ye! The Prince—
Prince: I’m pretty sure the trumpet gave us away, George.
N2: Macy and Lucy gasp, look at Cinderella’s outfit, and gasp again.
Lucy (whispering to Macy): This is even worse than when the plumber came by and she was juggling Max and Sam!
Macy (whispering to Lucy): Or when she was playing the kazoo when the baker came to deliver the bread.
Lucy: Cindy! Go inside and do the laundry.
Cinderella: What? Why? You always tell me to go do chores when there’s someone coming!
Macy: You . . . um . . . smell like fertilizer.
Cinderella: Fiiiiine.
N3: Cinderella starts toward the front door but ducks behind a bush when the Prince and George arrive.
Prince: Ladies. Will you do me the honor of attending the royal ball?
Lucy: OMG! OMG! OMG!
Macy: Your Majesty, we’d be delighted.
Prince: Excellent! Until then!
N1: As the Prince and George leave, Cinderella jumps out.
Cinderella: The royal BALL?! I’ll wear my new outfit! And ride my unicycle!
N2: As Cinderella does her happy dance, Macy and Lucy look at each other. Uh-oh . . .
👑 Scene 2 👑
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N3: The Prince and George are riding back to the royal palace on horseback.
Prince: I must say, those “wicked” ladies weren’t nearly as troublesome as I’d expected.
George: With all due respect, sir, they would never be mean to you.
Prince: I’m a decent judge of character, George. I can tell if people are mean.
George: I hear they force their stepsister to do chores while they sit about eating chocolates.
Prince: That would indeed be ghastly. But we mustn’t believe rumors.
George: Of course, Your Majesty.
👑 Scene 3 👑
N1: That night, Lucy and Macy sew their dresses for the ball.
Lucy: If Cindy wears that outfit, she’ll be a laughingstock! And so will we. Everyone will talk about us!
N2: Macy ponders for a moment.
Macy: Then we’ll hide the outfit. And the unicycle.
Lucy (hesitant): She’ll be so upset if she finds out.
Macy: It’s for her own good, Lucy—and ours.
N3: The stepsisters tiptoe into Cinderella’s room, where she’s fast asleep.
Macy (whispering): Get the outfit. I’ll grab the unicycle.
N1: Cinderella begins to stir.
Macy: Shhhh! Hurry!
N2: The stepsisters scurry away.
👑 Scene 4 👑
N3: The next night, Cinderella waves to her stepsisters as they climb into their carriage.
Cinderella: Don’t worry about me! I’m sure I’ll find my stuff! I’ll just meet you there later.
N1: Lucy and Macy shift uneasily in their seats.
Lucy: Cindy . . .
Macy: We’ve got to go! We’re late already!
N2: Cinderella tears through the house.
Cinderella: Max! Sam! Help me find my . . .
N3: All of a sudden, there’s a loud pop!
N1: The Fairy Godmother arrives in a shower of glitter, live-streaming on FairyGram.
FG (into her phone): ’Grammers! I’m here with ’Rella, ready to make her dreams come true!
Cinderella: My what now?
FG: Forget your cape, honey! I’ll make you an outfit everyone will love!
N2: The Fairy Godmother snaps her fingers. A gold dress and tiny glass slippers appear out of thin air.
Cinderella: Wow! But, um, that outfit isn’t . . . me. Also, it looks super uncomfortable.
FG: Fashion is pain, honey! It’ll be worth it. Just be home by midnight or the dress and shoes will vanish. Fun, right?!
Cinderella: Um . . . I . . .
FG: What do you have to lose?
Sam: The circulation in her feet?
Cinderella (resigned): I guess I’d rather go to the ball in that dress than not go at all . . .
FG (into her phone, triumphant): She’s in! Like and subscribe, ’Grammers! LIKE AND SUBSCRIBE!!!
👑 Scene 5 👑
N3: The ballroom in the royal palace is full of people promenading in their finest clothes.
N1: Everyone looks proper, and serious, and . . .
Lucy: So boring!
Macy: I miss Cindy—unicycle and all.
Lucy: Actually, her unicycle would make this party a lot more fun.
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Macy: We should go back and—
N2: A guest waves at the stepsisters.
Guest 1: Where is Cinderella this evening?
Lucy: Um . . . at home, finishing some chores.
Guest 2: On the night of the royal ball? When the whole town is here?
N3: Lucy falters. Macy steps in.
Macy: Chores are endless, am I right, people?
N1: Whispers ripple through the ballroom.
Guest 1 (to Guest 2): So the rumors about the wicked stepsisters are true.
Guest 2: Indeed!
N2: Lucy and Macy turn bright red.
N3: At that moment, the royal trumpet sounds.
George: Announcing . . . Cinderella!
N1: Cinderella enters in her lovely gold dress, limping. She hobbles over to a chair.
N2: She looks miserable.
Lucy: What’s up with that dress? She doesn’t even look like herself!
Macy: And she’s . . . sitting? Instead of dancing, talking, and goofing? We must fix this.
N3: Macy spots Max and Sam sneaking in through an open window.
Lucy: And I know just how to do it.
👑 Scene 6 👑
N1: Cinderella and the Prince have been dancing for an hour.
N2: It’s not going well.
Prince: It’s a pleasure to meet you!
Cinderella: Yes, I—ow—have to—OW—
Prince: I’m so sorry! I’m usually a great dancer.
Cinderella: It’s not you. It’s my shoes. I wanted to wear these fantastic—
N3: Suddenly, the clock strikes midnight.
Cinderella: Oh no! I have to go. Like, now!
N1: Cinderella kicks off the glass slippers and runs out of the ballroom . . .
N2: . . . right into Max and Sam, struggling to carry her cape, sneakers, and unicycle.
Cinderella: You found my stuff!
Max: Hurry!
N3: Max and Sam help her change as the clock finishes chiming.
N1: Pop! The gold dress vanishes.
Sam: Now go have fun!
Cinderella: I can’t. I have a feeling Lucy and Macy hate this outfit. In fact, I’m starting to think they hid it from me.
Max: But you love it.
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Cinderella: I don’t want to embarrass them.
N2: Just then, Lucy and Macy appear.
Lucy: We’re the ones who should be embarrassed, Cindy.
Macy: We were so concerned about what everyone would say if they saw your outfit and unicycle.
Lucy: And . . . well, they’re talking about us anyway.
Macy: We want you to be you. That’s why we told Max and Sam to go get your stuff.
Lucy: Sorry for our foolishness, Cindy.
Cinderella (smiling): Don’t worry! All is forgiven.
N3: The royal trumpet sounds again.
Prince: George! Give it a rest! (to Cinderella) There you are! Wait. Is that a unicycle? I’ve always wanted to ride one of those, but my father doesn’t think it’s proper for a prince.
N1: Cinderella, Lucy, and Macy look at each other and start laughing.
Prince: Will you teach me?
Cinderella: Totally!
Prince: Nice outfit, by the way.
N2: As Cinderella hops on her unicycle, the Fairy Godmother arrives.
FG (into her phone): You’re seeing it here first, ’Grammers—’Rella and the Royal Unicycle Lesson! And look at that cape! Magnificent! LIKE AND SUBSCRIBE!
👑 Epilogue 👑
Older Macy: So now you see. We were not so “wicked” after all.
Older Lucy: We just had to learn a lesson.
Older Macy: Which we hope you’ll remember next time you’re concerned about what people think.
Older Lucy: We like this version of Cinderella better.
Older Macy: Do you?
Write to Win
In the Epilogue, Older Lucy says, “We just had to learn a lesson.” What lesson did Lucy and Macy learn? Answer in a well-organized essay with details from the play. Send it to “Cinderella Contest” by June 1, 2022. Five winners will each receive a $20 gift card to the Scholastic Store Online. Visit the Storyworks Contests page for more information.
This play was originally published in the Mau/June 2022 issue.
Table of Contents
SEL Focus, Close Reading and Critical Thinking
5. Differentiate and Customize
Striving Readers, Advanced Readers, Multilingual Learners
1. Preparing to Read
Preview Text Features, Introduce Vocabulary, Set a Purpose for Reading
Before reading, poll the class to see if students are familiar with the story of Cinderella. Review the major plot points with our Background Builder Slideshow before reading the play. Have students who are already familiar with the fairy tale guide the review.
Tell students that the play they’re about to read is a new version of the Cinderella fairy tale, told from a different point of view. Have students open to the play and look at the illustrations throughout. Ask students to predict how this story will be different from the classic Cinderella.
Introduce vocabulary by showing or digitally sharing our Vocabulary Slideshow. Follow up before or after reading with the Vocabulary Skill Builder. Highlighted words: pruning, ruckus, bejeweled, ghastly, laughingstock, triumphant, promenading, falters.
Call on a volunteer to read the Up Close box on page 22.
2. Reading the Play
SEL Focus
Celebrating Differences
In the play, characters respond to Cinderella’s quirky behaviors and personality differently. Some, like the Prince, celebrate and enjoy Cinderella’s quirks immediately. Yet for much of the play, Cinderella’s stepsisters are ashamed and try to hide that Cinderella is different. It’s only at the end of the play that the stepsisters learn to embrace Cinderella as she is. As a group, discuss the negative impact of the stepsisters’ actions at the beginning of the play. Then reflect on the positive impact of their actions at the end of the play. Ask: How do you think Cinderella felt to have her differences finally celebrated by her stepsisters? (Students will probably say that it felt good, and that she probably felt seen and appreciated.) Then have students work in small groups and discuss the following questions: How have your differences been celebrated at home or at school? How can we celebrate the various differences in our community?
Close-Reading Questions
Read the Prologue. How does it make you interested in reading the play? (author’s craft) In the Prologue, the stepsisters say that they’re going to share the real story of Cinderella, which will show that they’re not actually wicked, like the original story paints them. This makes me curious about how the story will be different, which makes me want to keep reading. Also, the stepsisters say that the story they’re going to tell is much more interesting, so I want to know what happens! Finally, Macy and Lucy are funny, so I want to read more about them.
Based on what you learn in Scene 1, what are three words you would use to describe Cinderella? How is she different from her stepsisters? (character) Students may choose words like quirky, silly, fun. Cinderella is different from her stepsisters because her stepsisters are very worried about what people think of her. Cinderella seems unconcerned about how people view her.
embarrassed them in the past, and they tell her to hide when the Prince arrives to tell them about the ball.
What rumors about Cinderella’s stepsisters do you learn about in Scene 2? Are these rumors true? (plot) In Scene 2, George shares the rumor that the stepsisters force Cinderella to do chores while they relax and eat chocolates. So far, it seems the rumors are not true. It appears that Cinderella and her stepsisters are friends, but the stepsisters are embarrassed by Cinderella’s quirkiness. They tell her to go do chores when people are visiting as a way to hide that she’s different.
In Scene 3, why do Lucy and Macy hide Cinderella’s outfit and unicycle? Why is this wrong? (evaluating) The stepsisters hide Cinderella’s outfit and unicycle because they are worried that everyone will laugh at Cinderella—and at them—if she brings those items to the ball. Answers to the second question will vary, but students may say that hiding the outfit and unicycle is wrong because they do it behind Cinderella’s back or because they are trying to hide or change who Cinderella is.
In Scene 4, how does Cinderella’s Fairy Godmother help her? In what way does she hurt her? (plot) The Fairy Godmother helps Cinderella by getting her an outfit so she can go to the ball. She hurts Cinderella by giving her an uncomfortable outfit that Cinderella doesn’t like.
What realization do the stepsisters have in Scene 5? How does it change how they treat Cinderella? (plot) In Scene 5, Lucy and Macy realize how boring things are without their stepsister and that the ball would be more fun with her—quirks and all. They realize they should embrace her quirks because they make life more fun for everyone.
Critical-Thinking Question
Based on the lesson that Macy and Lucy learn in this play, how do you think they’ll treat Cinderella differently in the future? (theme) Answers will vary but should show that Macy and Lucy have learned to appreciate and celebrate Cinderella’s differences.
Answer the question that Older Lucy and Older Macy pose at the end of the play: Do you like the Storyworks version or the original version of Cinderella better? Explain your answer. (expressing an opinion) Answers will vary.
3. Skill Building and Writing
Featured Skill: Theme
Assign the Theme Skill Builder or assign the Slide Deck (available in higher and lower levels). Have students complete it independently or together with a partner. This skill builder will help prepare students to respond to the writing prompt on page 26.
4. Collaboration Station
Use the delightful illustrations in this play to help guide students reviewing the major plot points of the story. As you finish reading the scenes, have students add speech bubbles to the related illustration (Scene 1 is illustrated on page 22, Scene 4 on pages 24-25, and Scene 6 on page 26). They can add these speech bubbles with sticky notes in the magazine or on notes in the Presentation View on the website.
There are many retellings of Cinderella that students can explore. Have students work in groups to go to the library and find another retelling to read together. Then have students compare and contrast these two retellings. Or have them write their own!
Have students practice fluency by working in a small group with other multilingual learners or a mixed group with native speakers to read a scene aloud. Within the group, have students choose parts and practice reading the scene. Encourage students to help each other with words they don’t know. When everyone in the group feels comfortable, they can read their scene for the class.
Find other read-aloud play adaptations of fairytales and folktales in the Storyworks archive, such as Chicken Little, The Elephants and the Mice, and The Goose That Laid the Golden Eggs.
This interactive post from NCTE’s Read Think Write gives students step-by-step instructions on writing their own version of a classic story.
Looking for more modern spins on classic fairy tales? Check out Sarah Mlynowski’s hilarious best-selling Whatever After series.