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Just When Things Seemed Impossible

A heartfelt poem on the joy and hope of getting a second chance 

By Rosemerry Wahtola Trommer

Learning Objective: Students will identify and analyze the extended simile in this poem about second chances.

Other Key Skills: figurative language, fluency, text features, interpreting text, text structure, theme
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A simile compares two things using the words like or as. In this poem, what does the speaker compare second chances to? Why?

Just When Things Seemed Impossible

A second chance is like 

life handing you a pen

and saying, Here, sweetheart, 

write the story again. 

Except the book life gives us

to write in isn’t blank. 

It’s filled with all the life

that’s come before.

And now the pen is yours.

What will you do with it? 

How might you grow?

What will you choose to say? 

This moment, now, is your page. 

Imagine, what happens next?

This poem was originally published in the December 2024/January 2025 issue.  


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Step-by-Step Lesson Plan

1. Preparing to Read

  • Review the meaning of simile (a comparison of two things using the words like or as).
  • Direct students to read the title and study the poem illustration. Invite them to make a prediction about what the poem is about.  
  • Ask volunteers to read aloud the Up Close box and the blue bubble for the class.

2. Reading the Poem

A Note From Author Rosemerry Wahtola Trommer:

The poem is in Petrarchan sonnet form—sort of. Because it is not a traditional sonnet—no meter and no rhyme scheme—we could maybe say it is “inspired by” the Petrarchan sonnet form.

What I love about the Petrarchan sonnet form is that it consists of an octave (eight lines) followed by a sestet (six lines) that are in tension with each other—the tension point is actually built into the poem. Poems love opposition because life has opposition, and a poem more than anything wants to talk about what it means to be alive.

Traditionally, the first line of the sestet invites a turn (a volta) in which the poem changes direction. Often this is achieved with the word but or yet. In this poem, we could think of the turn in a few ways:

1) In the first stanza life has the pen, in the second, “you” do.

2) The first stanza is about the present moment looking to the past, and the second is about the present looking to the future.

3) The first stanza is about the known, and the second stanza is about the unknown.

Read the poem aloud, or play our Author Read-Aloud with Rosemerry Wahtola Trommer.

For fluency practice, have students take turns reading the poem aloud in pairs.

Ask students to underline words or phrases from the poem that they enjoy or havequestions about. Invite your students to share what they underlined and why in small groups or in a whole-group discussion.

Discuss the poem as a class, using the questions that follow as prompts.

3. Discussing the Poem

  1. Think about the title of the poem. Why does the poet include the word seemed in the title? How do you usually respond to a situation that feels impossible? (text features) The poet includes the word seemed to emphasize the difference between something that actually is impossible and something that only feels that way. Answers will vary for the second question. 
  2. Read lines 1-4. What does the poet compare second chances to? (figurative language) The poet compares second chances to a pen that allows us to create different and better outcomes, to try again. 
  3. The poet tells us that “the book life gives us to write in isn’t blank.” What is in this book? (interpreting text) The book is the story of each of our lives so far. It’s made up of everything that’s happened, including all the things we’ve done, said, felt, and thought.
  4. In the first line of the second stanza, the poet writes “And now the pen is yours.” What’s important about this line? How does it create a change in the poem? (text structure) This line is important because it tells us that we get to write what comes next. We have a second chance to do things better if we choose to do so. The line creates a change in the poem from the past (“all the life that’s come before”) to the future (“what happens next”).
  5. What do you think the poet means when she writes “This moment, now, is your page”? (figurative language) The poet means that the present moment is like a new page in the stories of our lives. Through our decisions and actions, we’re writing our stories at the same time we’re living them.
  6. What message does the poet want us to take from her poem, especially when we feel that things are impossible? (theme) The poet wants us to feel hopeful and empowered about our lives. We can’t change the past, but we’re given the chance to affect what comes next—by doing a better job with our choices as we grow and change.

4. Skill Building

Distribute or digitally assign the Poetry Kit, which will take students on a deep dive into the poem and offer opportunities for students to connect the poem with other stories in the issue.

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Explore the Storyworks Archive

Dig into the Storyworks archive for more poems that feature similes: My Tongue Is Like a Map, Grandfather’s Chopsticks, and Fire-Flowers

Read Another Poem by Rosemerry Wahtola Trommer

You’ll find “Hope,” also by Wahtola Trommer, in our October/November 2023 issue. After students read both of Wahtola Trommer’s poems, lead a class discussion comparing the two in terms of figurative language, tone, topic, and the poet’s message to her readers.

Make a Connection

This issue includes two stories that also explore the importance of second chances. “The Amazing Life of Flora the Elephant” is our nonfiction article about a former circus elephant’s new life in a wilderness sanctuary, and “Sweet Potato,” this issue’s fiction story, tells how a dog, a girl, and a lonely neighbor give one another second chances. 

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