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Birthday Time

This poem is a 30th birthday present to Storyworks from one of our favorite poets!

By Rebecca Kai Dotlich
From the September 2022 Issue

Learning Objective: Students will look for the author’s message: that a birthday is a time for dreaming about everything that’s possible in the year ahead.

Other Key Skills: interpreting text, poetic structure
UP CLOSE: Author's Purpose

What big idea about birthdays does the author express in the poem?

Birthday Time

A birthday’s the time

for envisioning brand-new

a calendar of daydreams

just waiting for you,


with wishes and wonder

and dreams and surprises,     

like a treasure of stars

and a bagful of prizes . . .  


when everything’s better

and everything’s bolder

and it’s marvelous being

one year older.

This poem was originally published in the September 2022 issue.  


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Step-by-Step Lesson Plan

1. Preparing to Read

  • Ask students to read the title of the poem and look at the illustration. Discuss what’s happening in the picture. Ask: What is the connection between the girl blowing out the candles and what is shown in the swirl rising up from the cake?
  • Point out the bubble on the right side of the poem. Ask students what else in this issue celebrates Storyworks’ 30th birthday? (the cover)
  • Have a volunteer read aloud the Up Close box. 

2. Reading the Poem

  • Together as a class, listen to the Author Read-Aloud of the poem or call on a student to read the poem out loud.
  • Discuss the poem together by answering the questions below. 

3. Discussing the Poem

  • In line 3, what is “a calendar of daydreams”? Why might you think about that on your birthday? (interpreting text) “A calendar of daydreams” refers to all the days ahead on which you can dream about doing new and exciting things. You might think about that on your birthday because your birthday is a moment that marks the beginning of a new year and a time to consider what it will bring.
  • In line 7, why do you think the poet compares birthdays to “a treasure of stars”? (interpreting text) “A treasure of stars” sounds like something wonderful and magical, the way birthdays often feel.
  • What pattern do the rhymes follow in the poem? What feeling do the rhymes create? (poetic structure) The second and fourth line in each stanza rhyme; this is also called an ABCB rhyme pattern. Answers will vary, but students might say that the rhymes create an upbeat, happy feeling.
  • What big idea about birthdays might the poet want you to think about? (author’s purpose) The poet probably wants you to think of your birthday as a special time to dream about all the wonderful things that you could do in the year ahead. And because you’re one year older, you can do more than before! 

4. Skill Building

Distribute or assign the Poetry Kit (available in your Resources tab), in which students will be able to write their answers to the above questions and more. It is available to print or as an interactive slide deck that students can complete digitally.

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Teach Rhyme Schemes

Your students can learn about rhyme schemes in poems from this article by Poetry4Kids.com. Afterward, see if they can identify the rhyme scheme in “Birthday Time.” (It’s ABCB.)  (Note that the webpage contains some ads.)

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